In West Bay yesterday there were lots of children fishing for crabs in the harbour soI took some photos to paint later. I don’t know whether to add some pen or leave it as it is. What do you think?

In West Bay yesterday there were lots of children fishing for crabs in the harbour soI took some photos to paint later. I don’t know whether to add some pen or leave it as it is. What do you think?
Hi Dave,
Personally think it needs the ink added to add some definition. I’m no artist (as you know) but to me it looks kind of half-finished at the moment.
Cheers
Ron